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This page is The Mutiny v5, graded against the anti-AI rubric, ixi, and M. It is one of the projects Brandon built and put online. The grown-up details are below, tap Grown-up mode to read them the normal way.

self-eval · believe-you-me · the mutiny v5

The Mutiny v5, graded against the anti-AI rubric, ixi, and M

An honest scorecard of my own Mutiny prose. The analysis is accurate and it is the mode-from-vocal read that was requested. The prose leans on slogans and scale numbers where it should write behavior and feeling, so the craft score sits low while accuracy carries it.

5.1
raw average / 10
8
accuracy
~4.5
prose craft
1. Slogans and compressed verdicts3 / 10
My worst closer reads if the title is a clue, the mutiny is the voice refusing the dark floor and pulling the field up for over two minutes. That is the gun-range pull-quote. M never writes one.
2. Behavior-first physicality4 / 10
I open on Bb Aeolian, the bass rooted on the 1 and 5. M opens on the lead guitar holds F4 plus Bâ™­3 and lets it ring, no bass, no vocal. You can hear M. Mine stays inside the numbers.
3. The banned "not X" shape5 / 10
One hit, the brightness stays a property of the line, not the chord. Small, and it is exactly the pattern to cut.
4. The ixi signature move5 / 10
ixi holds one vocal pitch and recolors it as each chord moves under it, naming a feeling each step. I write the vocal raises the major third and move on. I never walk that D across Bb, Gb, and Ab.
5. Accuracy and evidence8 / 10
Every degree traces to mutiny_section_modes.json and matches the keys-mode-aware verdict of Bb Phrygian into Aeolian. The manuscript frames it as Bb major with b6/b7 mixture, my sheet frames it as Bb Aeolian and Phrygian. The notes are the same, and mine is the vocal-first read that was asked for.
6. Burstiness and sentence variance4 / 10
My sentences run eighteen to thirty words and stay even. No short punch lands. M drops Six bars of one interval. and No bass.
7. Sentence and paragraph minimums6 / 10
Every sentence clears six words. A few paragraphs run only two sentences instead of the three-sentence floor.
8. The "before" ban and intensifiers7 / 10
The Mutiny text never uses "before." One soft "still" slips into a key-line.
9. Object versus number5 / 10
Scale degrees are exact, and they stay abstract. M anchors in the guitar, the tab grid, the silence. I anchor in degree labels.
10. Feeling named4 / 10
ixi names the feeling on every harmonic point. My prose names almost none and tracks degrees like a clinician. Only the favorite-moment lines carry warmth.

The opening, side by side

Mine (v5), abstraction-first

The Mutiny opens in Bb Aeolian, the bass rooted on the 1 (Bb) and 5 (F) with a b2 (Cb) rub, the band stating the i (Bb minor).

M (model-rebuild), behavior-first

Six bars of one interval. The lead guitar holds F4 plus Bâ™­3, an open Bâ™­5 power chord, and lets it ring. No bass. No vocal. No rhythm gtr until bar 2.5.

The fix, four concrete moves

  1. Open each song on the sounding event, the guitar holding the interval, the silence, the bar the bass enters.
  2. Hold one vocal note and recolor it across the chords, naming what each chord does to that pitch.
  3. Cut the four pull-quote closers and let paragraphs end on the object or the unresolved tension.
  4. Name one feeling per section, the way ixi always does.