HARD GATE — the 20th time

Soft metaphor verbs — plain verbs only

Nine verbs banned as soft metaphors against abstract subjects. Any hit fails the anti-AI voice gate at sev 3. Wired 2026-07-07.

The nine

  1. lands / landed / landing
  2. sits / sat / sitting
  3. names / named / naming
  4. reaches for / reached for
  5. leans on / leaned on
  6. hangs on / hung on
  7. orbits / orbited
  8. rests / rested (on)
  9. rides / rode / riding

Plain-verb swap table

Soft verbWhat it fakesPlain-verb swap
landsarrival, impact, closurearrives, hits, comes home, breaks open, opens, closes, reaches the listener
sitssteady presence, dwellingstays, stands, remains, lives, presses, weighs, holds (on note X), falls between
namesidentification, articulationsays, speaks, tells, describes, states, identifies, sees, faces, confronts
reaches forintent, effortgrabs, picks, takes, wants, tries, uses, moves to, goes for, borrows
leans ondependence, favorrelies on, uses, repeats, returns to, depends on (name the concrete part)
hangs onpivot, contingencydepends on, waits for, holds, pivots on, turns on (name the actual pivot)
orbitscirculation, centeringcircles, returns to, centers on, revolves around (name the harmonic pivot)
rests onanchoring, foundationsits on (literal only), holds on, stays on, pedals on, remains on
ridestracking, layering aboveplays over, sits on, stays over, tracks, follows (name the actual anchor)

Before / after — the shape to break

Before (AI tell)

The chorus lands on the downbeat with a shimmer.
The verse sits in the middle of the mix.
The bridge reaches for the relative minor.
The rhythm guitar leans on the tonic.
The whole thesis hangs on that one line.
The melody orbits the flat six.
The arrangement rests on the sub-bass pedal.
The vocal rides the harmony a fourth above.
The chapter names the wound.

After (plain verb)

The chorus arrives on the downbeat.
The verse stays low in the mix.
The bridge moves to the relative minor.
The rhythm guitar plays the tonic under everything.
The whole thesis depends on that one line.
The melody circles the flat six.
The arrangement pedals on the sub-bass.
The vocal tracks a fourth above the harmony.
The chapter says what the wound is.

Proof — gate FAILS on all nine

Ran anti_ai_voice_gate.py check against a seeded paragraph with one sentence per verb. Exit code 1.

File: softverb_test.txt
Patterns with hits: 11
Total hits: 19
Severity-weighted score: 56  (threshold: 10)
Severity-3 hits: 18  (any sev-3 = fail)

 hits sev category    note
    9   3 hard_gate   soft-metaphor-verb-9 (lands/sits/names/reaches for/
                        leans on/hangs on/orbits/rests/rides) applied
                        to abstract subject — replace with a plain verb
    1   3 hard_gate   'reaches for X' — grabs, picks, takes, wants
    1   3 hard_gate   'leans on X' — relies on, uses, repeats
    1   3 hard_gate   'hangs on X' — depends on, waits for, holds
    1   3 hard_gate   'orbits X' — circles, returns to, centers on
    1   3 hard_gate   'rests on X' — sits on (literal), depends on
    1   3 hard_gate   'rides X' — plays over, sits on, stays over
    1   3 hard_gate   'names' escalated to sev 3 — reword every use
    1   3 hard_gate   'lands' escalated to sev 3 — reword every use
    1   2 hard_gate   'sits' as metaphor verb
    1   3 hard_gate   instrument-refusal grammar (co-occurring tell)

GATE: FAIL

Where this fires

Corpus: ~/.claude/skills/_shared/anti_ai_tells.json (86 rules, 9 new)
Runner: ~/.claude/skills/_shared/anti_ai_voice_gate.py check FILE — exit 1 on any sev-3 hit
Backup: ~/.claude/skills/_shared/anti_ai_tells.json.bak-softmetaphor9-20260707
Memory: feedback_soft_metaphor_verbs_hard_gate.md (indexed in MEMORY.md under Anti-AI voice)
Applies to: Christian book series, music books, tarot books, Horror Vanguard reviews, ixi sheets, chat replies. Reviewer proposals containing any of the nine are rejected — reviewer's wording does not override.
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