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This page is Candidate ↔ Drafts reconciliation, all 10 songs. It is one of the projects Brandon built and put online. The grown-up details are below, tap Grown-up mode to read them the normal way.

BELIEVEYOUME · Shiner (2025) · toward the real new-style book

Candidate ↔ Drafts reconciliation, all 10 songs

The deeper new-style book is the candidate manuscript. Each chapter has to reconcile against the report-only deep drafts that fed it, with the stem-verified section-mode read as the independent tiebreaker. This is the full-album result.

Result: all 10 candidate chapters reconcile with the deep drafts. The candidates already absorbed the drafts, so there are no prose-vs-prose merge conflicts. The section-mode read independently confirms all 10 tonics and caught the Jackie tonic (B♭ → E♭) on its own, matching the draft. Two songs, My Mirror and So Far So, are where my per-section detector overstated a major-third clash, and the whole-song vocal tally overruled it: both are minor-voiced, the candidate was right on both. Every key stays verified: false pending one pointed ear-check per song.

Merge status

01
Asleep In The Trunk
RECONCILED
02
The Alligator
RECONCILED
03
The Mutiny
RECONCILED
04
So Far So
CORRECTED
05
My Mirror Hates Me
CORRECTED
06
Endless Summer
RECONCILED
07
Lazarus
RECONCILED
08
Not Too Much
RECONCILED
09
Broken Satellites
RECONCILED
10
Jackie
RECONCILED
The two corrections, My Mirror Hates Me and So Far So. My per-section detector flagged a major-third clash in both, which would have made each another voice-raises-the-bright-third song. The whole-song vocal tally overrules that on both. My Mirror: sung G (minor 3rd) 17.4% against G♯ 12.3%, about 1.41 to one, bass plays zero G♯, the purest natural minor on the record. So Far So: sung F (minor 3rd) beats F♯ about 2.7 to one, and the F♯ the old tab carried was a Drop-C guitar fingering that never sounded in the band or the voice. On both songs the voice carries the minor third, the inverse of the album's signature move, and the candidate had it right. I corrected the shipped manuscript blocks and caveated the showcase so neither oversells it. The lesson: the per-section clash flag is directional noise on minor-voiced songs, the authority is the whole-song tally.

Per-song verdict

SongResolved key (candidate = draft = keys_resolved)Section-mode read (independent)Pending ear-check
01 AsleepF minorF home all sections; voice major 3rd in 5/8; darkens to Aeolian late ✓opening sung A vs A♭, 8.9–76s
02 AlligatorG majorG home; mostly Ionian + Dorian dips; voice major 3rd B in 4 ✓90–120s chorus sung third
03 MutinyB♭ major (♭VI/♭VII mixture)B♭ home; band flat-side minor; voice major 3rd D in 6/8, the most ✓180–240s body
04 So Far SoD minorD home; band minor third AND voice minor third (F over F♯ 2.7:1); per-section clash flags overstated, correctedsung third
05 My MirrorE minor (Aeolian)E home; voice carries the minor third G (1.41:1), section clash flags overstated, corrected30–60s verse vs 120–150s bridge
06 Endless SummerB♭ majorB♭ home in all 8 sections, firmest tonic; mostly Ionian ✓ (card's F Mixolydian is the same notes)sung D vs blue D♭
07 LazarusC, sectional major→minorC home; Dorian front half then Aeolian back, exactly "bright open, dark close" ✓first 30s vs 180–240s
08 Not Too MuchA♭ majorA♭ Ionian throughout; voice and band agree major, zero clash ✓the ♭VI middle label, not the key
09 Broken SatellitesE♭ major (B♭ = V)E♭ home; Ionian front, Dorian/Phrygian back ✓E♭ vs B♭ as home
10 JackieE♭ majorE♭ home, bass shows zero B♭; section read corrected B♭→E♭ on its own, matching the draft ✓E♭ vs B♭ as home
Records: reconciliation_asleep_2026-06-15.md, section_modes.yaml. The tiebreaker is the stem evidence, not a preference between the two prose versions. Where the per-section detector and the whole-song tally disagreed (My Mirror), the whole-song tally and the candidate won.

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